The Great thing about doing a story set in your home town is that you dont have to come up scenery, its already there. And i knew that the first thing I wanted to show was the city itself, and so came this little ugly thumbnail!!
I had a good idea already that I wanted to view the cityside from across the water, so i found myself camera in hand over by the train station, but couldnt get the "widescreen" shot that i wanted.........
...got these up by the roundabout at and was then able to make a better rough draft....
Because I hadnt decided to do this process piece until after i finished the final I've inked over the the final pencils....
As I was saying about it helping me, well seeing the inks scanned, I've went a bit too mad with the hatching and it looks messy, especially considering it will be smaller on print it will look even worse. I took 5 minutes literally and through in some colour for definition and it did seem to work but I would really like some opinions lads, so please feel free to rip the back out of it!!
So there it is, maybe an unsuccessful pic but its a process peice none the less, hope I didnt bore you too much.
its not bad just a little to much going on a wee bit more simplicity goes a long way sometimes and maybe differnet shadow tones instead of all black to give it a bit of depth.
ReplyDeleteYeah, think im going to try just an outlined one, i can add everything else digitally, really glad i done this-made me realise i Balls up!! Ive done the whole first page in a simpler style too. Ah what can you do, better realising now!
ReplyDeletedont cut yourself up about it its still good u can still recognis all the buildings and things its just the simpler style might work better.
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